The House

Mon, 08/21/2017 - 07:49 -- RosaB88

It's not quite right. 

No, it's too wide. 

 

I can't get the height right,

And it's not even. 

 

The color is all wrong,

I accidentally put spots. 

 

This part looks all wrong,

It's too round. 

 

That part is too pointy,

And there it's not quite straight. 

 

This is why I'm not an artist. 

I can't even draw a house.

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