Hopeless Desire

Locations

33709
United States
27° 49' 19.0488" N, 82° 44' 24.3924" W
33709
United States
27° 49' 19.0488" N, 82° 44' 24.3924" W
33709
United States
27° 49' 19.0488" N, 82° 44' 24.3924" W

I'm on a thin sheet of ice.

Either way I step I will have to pay the price.

Contradicting ideas toy with my heart and mind,

Ideas where not even sanity can unbind.

Unbind my confusion of what to do

Because I, so badly, desire to be with you.

You make me laugh when times are rough,

Make me smile when you flex, thinking you are "buff."

Words can't begin to describe all you deserve,

All you have been through, many abrupt curves.

Wherever you are, remain, or travel

I will be here with you when you come unglued, unravel.

When all you need is a hug, a place to rest

My shoulder if open for your head to relax, to nest.

Although you believe us together is not meant to be.

I feel otherwise.

I disagree.

I guess we will have to wait and live

Our inevitable destiny.

Comments

a-voice-in-the-crowd

lovely darling!

ChaosWolf

Seems somewhat sad in a way. Just my thoughts. Maybe I'm just not seeing it how it was meant to be portrayed.

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