Helllo-( Poetery slam Scholarship contest Oct 4)

Sun, 09/22/2013 - 07:50 -- aadhia

The sun blinds my eyes, your stare takes control of my heart.

You can be so sweet, but yet sometimes your words rip me apart.

You turn away, taking my heart with you.

I can't say goodbye, there is nothing I can do.

But yet, despite the pain, I still remember that day.

The day when I felt so low and everything was gray.

The day all of my troubles finally faded away;

The day when you had me at "Hello."

My love for you is hard to explain,

My heart beats like the rain, my blood stops cold in my veins.

I can never find the right words to say;

I worry about our relationship everyday.

There's just something about you that makes me love you in every way.

I never want to hear you say goodbye,

I'll just keep remembering the day you had me at "Hello."

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