Heaven Hill

Location

Carson City
Heaven Hill
United States
44° 14' 56.1696" N, 74° 0' 12.5424" W

With a peek into the sky,

I forgot where I lie.

Upon a place I wished to know,

I twisted my head to and fro.

At first the limits seemed afar,

But closer it became which felt bizarre.

I nearly reached with a grip.

I not quite kissed with a lip.

The clouds appeared near.

I was there and there was here.

Suddenly, I felt a certain sigh,

For the heavens not so very high.

I took a peek into the sky

Only to forget where I lie. 

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