Heaven‘s Presence

Sun, 06/19/2022 - 12:22 -- Creator

Days joy charmed her to merry

Never have I found curves and curls spin to glory 

Every course of aura sailed to eternity 

Her laugh felt like cherry.


Hell’s gore tamed his sweetness 

White sparkling dentition snorted Smile’s eagerness

The world seemed like a mess

Yet heaven waiting for his prayer to bless.


Her laugh they kept in her heart’s Treasury

He said prayers that never ascended Faith’s throne in a hurry

Heaven said “amen” and gave him a story 

Heights of fun descended to give him moments quite sunny. 

This poem is about: 
Our world
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