Heartbeat

Thu, 07/31/2014 - 14:16 -- laronlc

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One beat, two beats, three beats, four

How much time is there before it wants more?

One plus one, times two plus four,

this is a sign that the heart wants more.

Beep beep beep, we're blind to the core,

sometimes we wonder why it takes more.

Heartbreaks should be the main cause to drop you to the floor,

but as I said before, we're blind to the core.

Each time the heart breaks, its multiplied by four.

Four times two times three times four,

this is my heartbeat still wanting more.

No need to worry because the heart knows more.

Here is the conversation i chose to endure.

"If you want to hurt yourself, go ahead sure, but don't come back to me still wanting more.

Good grief, what is it, why must we take more?

Just stop, stop beating, we're never gonna score!!!"

"Of course we're gonna score, I still want more.

Now stop your complaining and open up that door."

By: LaRon Curtis

Comments

cameron.childers.79

Amazing!

laronlc

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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