happiness

Mon, 12/09/2013 - 21:53 -- poetgal

She never could see her full potential

But it never was that far away,

Everyday was a straight journey 

And she knew what was on the

Agenda for the day, a cloud of

Doubts would cloud her head

But she knew for sure that one

Day she would make it ahead, 

The luxurious life of high hills

And hollywood stars never 

Bothered her because she knew

It was all artificial being, 

She pushed and pushed and

Around the corner she would 

Be eating and cleaning off the 

Plate of sucess and she finally

Could rest because she knew 

She had done her best.

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poetgal

The part that was my favorite was the portion was about eating and cleaning off the plate of success.

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