Good Bye

Mon, 02/05/2018 - 22:05 -- asevon

Dear Him,

Your eyes shine so bright,

Just as the stars in the sky.

I remember the night,

You had said good bye.

The sparkling sun gleamed down,

As I replay the memories;

When you were still around.

I'll remember them through the centuries.

The stars started to fade,

As the sun began to set.

I'm beginning to forget the shade,

Of the color that is wet.

Please know I will never forget.

Nor will I have one regret.

                From,

                        The Girl You Left

 

 

 

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Comments

KSHAriana

wow, this made me shed a tear, love your wiriting keep it up.

asevon

Thank you so much, it means a lot that you like my writing.

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