
TO GOOD TO BE TRUE
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They way your lips touched minds somehow made me lost with your eyes as u slowly grab me close to you.
Making me lose sight of the world around me
As you lead in
I let you go for it
Instead of wanting sex I wanted your present
.to protect me in your hands
to love me even when I"m shaking like a leaf you some how you stayed calm for the both of us
Even though it was only on the cheek somehow was everything to me
to let go and you being able to caught the missing pieces which landed me in the eyes of your beating heart
Which was the beginning of a major heartbreak ...
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when i read this poem
i felt your msg, i see that you put your all to this poem
very powerfully stated
emotionally driven
it can be hard to overcome a heartbeak ending to a relationship
but at the same, it saved your life because underneath it all, there are lessons to learn
grow wise and move forward-well done
Awesome job Imani so intriguing and fascinating makes me want to read more! I feel your pain, been there. You express ur feelings in the best way through poetry :)
This is really good and it shows the hurt from what you needed something as a support and they left you standing alone, those times you just want someone there for you but they use you. I know that true feeling and what it teaches you, but not to be cold hearted and bitter but that much appericated for the true love that will follow after thoses who leave. Check out this one I wrote, http://www.powerpoetry.org/poems/affliction-love-vs-bitter-aftertaste-st...