Gone With No Hope For Recovery

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I have a metal object... Do you know what it is?

It could be heavy or light... Do you want to see it inmy hand?

I feel the cold metal as I place it to my body

I feel my heart in my throat as think of whats about to happen

I've tried before but failed

My eyes filling with tears

My life is ending right before me

I'm finally leavn this place behind

I close my eyes and smie a real smile

BANG

Darkness engulfs me as my lifeless body hits the ground

I'm finally home

 

 

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