To Give my Thoughts Life

Location

I think constantly

Insesantly

Thoughts pour though my mind

Some malevolent some kind

I can't stop the steam

They are flowing all the time

Thereis no cure 

You can only treat the symptoms

Poetry can quel the flow 

But onlyfora moment

So I need a constant supply

Or my mind may die.

Comments

RebeccaYSPerez

It was a great piece, just a few minor errors that can be swiftly fixed; such as changing "Insesantly" to "Insistently" (assuming that is what you meant) and a few typing errors where there were no spaces between words. Thank you so much for sending this in!

Becca.

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