Get It Right

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108 West Hwy 96
United States
45° 4' 44.814" N, 93° 6' 24.8184" W
I don't know how.
I don't know why. 
Why we had to say goodbye.
I did you wrong,
So I won't fight,
How long will it take me to get it right?
 
I didn't know I was going away, 
I didn't know what to say,
All I know is I cry at night,
That is why I'll never fight.
That is why I can't get it right.
 
I know right now, 
Why my heart is sad,
Because I loved you,
Then you hurt me, bad.
I won't sleep tonight,
I can't get it right.
 
But I'll take the hits, 
I'll take the bruises,
I can take the pain,
Hell, who cares who loses
The one who will never be the same,
I can't get it right, and I'm to blame.

Comments

Buttercup010

I really enjoyed your writing, I loved the repetition and rhyme, it made for a beautiful piece of work.

ashley.eatmon

Thank you very much :)

Henrietta Atsupi Gborgblorbu

You such a great writer.....thanks for unleashing your thoughts on paper

ashley.eatmon

Thank you i write what's on my heart

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