Garden of Eden

Thu, 10/03/2013 - 18:24 -- naila

 God created Heaven and Earth,the Sun and everything under it.God created You and I You were the first-Perfect and Compatible-made just for MeI, Your sweet Princess, the sweetest Taboo, had the loyalty and devotion of a cherished rough collie. Transfixed by Your charm and bounded by God's will You had Me and I, You You were the Rat Pack, I was Nsyncso I was content to love in silence until our day was to come. The snake appeared as if it belonged; seemingly harmless(the worst kind), offering promises and pleasures that beguiled you to take them. you took them; we both died.

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