A Friend Under Water

Mon, 07/27/2015 - 18:47 -- Ri Saki

Her ship is sinking, it's now 20 feet below.
It's already submerged with only one place to go.
Down in the murky depths where the light doesn't show. Her passion is gone, now stagnant, as the water ceases to flow.
Her beauty still exists but is constantly being plucked at by her foe.
She continues to fall, wishing that someone had been there to row.
Her ship was always sinking, but it took me too long to know.

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Ri Saki

Thank you!! :)

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