Freedom

Wed, 08/28/2013 - 19:03 -- sshis

I'm standing here, alone in the rain

Bloody tears running down my face again.

I'm sorry I betrayed you

Will you hate me forever?

I'm torn to pieces; bleeding inside.

You scream you hate me as I start to cry

Can you hear the sound

Of the blood in my veins?

You scream at me so loud

Do you have anything to gain?

If I said I was sorry

Would you even hear me?

I never wanted you to leave,

But now I'm finally free.

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