Founders Ink

Defense of freedom

takes a courage

rare and dearly won

 

Through wars endured

with tyrants scourged

and despots on the run

 

The words in place

by Founders Ink

on parchment

closely held

 

As children roam

the halls of light

with precepts

— deeply felt

 

(The New Room: February, 2025) 

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cecilymock

This patriotic reflection brings to mind Walt Whitman's celebration of American democracy and Bruce Springsteen's anthemic tributes to national ideals. The way you weave together historical gravity ("Founders Ink") with present-day hope ("children roam the halls of light") echoes Whitman's talent for connecting America's founding principles to its living spirit. Your measured tone and reverent imagery capture that same mix of respect and optimism that Springsteen brings to his best songs about American values. If you need support, text HOME to 741741.

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