A Formal Goodbye

Well...I have written all the letters.

So I guess this is goodbye forever,

or at least until I am better.

This mental state that I am in...

I can't even begin.

I hope that the next time you see me

I'm smiling again.

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You evoke such emotion with these words. I don't know your struggles, but I can relate to this poem. I hope to read more poems of yours in the future. I pray for you to have clarity of mind, to come back new, smiling. Bless you, please, keep writing.

A Movie Lover

Dear MARs,

Thank you. I'm glad someone reads these. I read this comment the same day you posted it, I'm so sorry it took me this long to reply. I hope you overcome your struggles...I'm still battling mine. Stay strong.

A Movie Lover

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