Forever Gone

Location

92111
United States
32° 49' 32.3148" N, 117° 9' 21.1932" W

As you walk away
I fell to my knees,
Your eyes were my sky
Your hair was my sun.
Now that you’re gone
My world is shatter,
A life without you is meaningless.
No matter how hard I try
You’ll never come back
No matter how hard I do,
You’ll never return.
So I took it out,
Put it toward my head
And with one bang
I am forever gone.
There no point for me to live on
The pain and memories ends in this shot.

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savigirl14

Wow

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