#Flawless

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What I see is different how can this be

The light in my eyes are a bit brighter than yours

My heart beats and thinks lesser than yours

I feel like a wildflower in a pool of roses

Like the moon trying to save the sun from dying

But its okay even the sky crys sometimes

And yes there are still days like this

Yet loosing nothing and gaining everything

As flawless as a paradise sunset.

 

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