First Impressions

Fri, 05/31/2013 - 13:43 -- Nich

Location

78228
United States
29° 27' 19.2204" N, 98° 33' 40.0104" W

Oh! Outstretched hands implore;
I insist on taking them.
Calloused they may be
But all the while worth more
Than their salts:
Eyeing ahead to the outcomes
Of butterfly occurrences,
Or hesitation swallowing,
Of forged opportunities
Or forgotten times...
But I digress.
Come, I invite you:
Take me in
How you see fit,
And form your first impressions.
Only your reach will connect us-
Shall you take the chance?

Comments

Hayley.Edwards

Dude, props. I really like this. 

Nich

Thank you very much!

a-voice-in-the-crowd

I really like this :)

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