The Fire

Sat, 11/15/2014 - 12:07 -- JaiLit5

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i saw the light fade into dark

i felt the spark ignite a fire

 

an awful fire

that i could not control

 

it burned so cold

the flames froze my heart

 

and paralyzed my soul.

 

i couldn’t move

not forward, not backward

 

frozen in fear

panic took over my life

 

i felt the attack rising

my blood ran cold, my muscles tensed in and out


and paralyzed my soul.

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