FEELINGS

Tue, 06/08/2021 - 12:54 -- Sammck

Feelings will make you walk on air

And also put tingles in your toes

They can make you feel warmth all over

They can also make your heart glow

Some feelings can cause you to act silly

And some can make you feel devine

A very special gift from Him 

A special gift that very few find

His special  gifts from high above

Are the parts of life that keep us going

Are the special  parts of life called love

This poem is about: 
Our world

Comments

mrapook

Nice poem, but you need a few more syllables in some of the lines to help it flow better.

Sammck

Thank you. Does this help it flow better?

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