Feeling the Rythm

Sat, 11/03/2012 - 01:34 -- jt504

My dance instructor, so cool so fresh
My heart racing as I am put to the test
Stepping to every sound, feeling every beat
Making sure that I accomplish an amazing feat
Though tough times he is always there
Together my pain we share
Bringing me into the light, making me see
Just how important is he
We move back and forth, left to right
He is an inspiration even until the end of night.

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jt504

This was a fun writing assignment. I have an amazing dance instructor who has brought me into the world of dancing. I dance everyday for at least an hour. I really feel that dancing is as important as water to me. My passion for dancing derives from my instructor who has taught me how dancing and expressing myself can make me more happy. It is good to express yourself and tell the world just what you are made of and how you are different from somebody else. Thank you for reading my poem, I hope you enjoyed it.

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