Features of a Ghost

Location

92648
United States
33° 40' 41.5056" N, 118° 0' 45.9108" W

Your eyes are like the shining moon on my windowsill at night...
I miss you
Your hair is like the waves I see from day to day, dancing along the shore...
I miss you
Your arms are like the roads I travel on, stretching out towards me forever.
Their call draws my thoughts to you...
I miss you
Your heart is like the sky... It is spread everywhere in my view, with no beginning or end to its affect...
I miss you
Your presence is like the sun... I had you in my life for a while, and when you left, I pleaded for your return... for you had left too soon...
I miss you

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Comments

jgelardohertan

I lost my sister when I was 11 years old to suicide, she didn't have to take her life, and no one should ever feel so alone and helpless that they must do the same.

savigirl14

this is beautiful

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