Eyes Closed

Eyes closed, thoughts drifting away

 

Each image passing by as if it were a car on a train

 

Inhaling the pure, ethereal air

 

Exhaling smoke with the potential to consume my soul

 

 

 

Eyes closed, thoughts drifting away

 

My body’s sensations becoming more apparent

 

No more thinking, only feeling

 

Blind to the physical world, attuning to the unseen

 

 

 

Eyes closed, thoughts drifting away

 

Tension fading from the mind

 

Weight lifting from the heart

 

Weightlessness

 

 

Eyes closed, thoughts drifting away

 

Creating a spark of internal joy

 

Molding an indestructable being from within

 

Awesomeness.  

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