Excuse Me...

Fri, 03/28/2014 - 21:16 -- Jayvoni

Excuse me because I have my life together

Excuse me because my GPA is higher than yours would ever

Excuse me because I always have my umbrella for rainy weather

Excuse me because I know inside you think you are better

Excuse me because I try to create a positive ambiance

Excuse me because you never catch me crying

Excuse me beause when I say I've got this, im not lying

Excuse me because I am strong, while your sprirt is dying

Excuse me because you see me changing

Excuse me because im working hard to keep my past from remaining

Excuse me because my hand is still out for you

Excuse me because I know I still love you...

 

 

Comments

Angelwith1wing

Deep. The repetition and voice kept me reading on. You got a skill to write. Don't give up on it, use it. God bless and keep writing on my friend:)!!!

Jayvoni

Thanks! I really appreciate it, aand om glad you liked it. You dont know how much thats means to me, thank you!

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