End It All

Sat, 05/04/2013 - 18:10 -- book2u


United States
42° 58' 30.828" N, 83° 39' 41.184" W

you see the pain in my eyes
you see my tears that I cry
you see my blood soak the floor
and I say what a world
you ask why I did it
and all I say is that I couldn't bear it
she asked "what couldn't you bear?"
all I say " losing you."

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