Empty Link

There has been an empty spot in my life
When it comes to love im left behind
What can I do to work this thing through
How can I tell you how I feel for you

You’re surrounded by many fans
No end they keep coming fast
No room for me and you to socialize
It seems unreal but I continue to try

I just want to know about you deep inside
No games, no worries, just you and I
I’m pure and sweet, you’ll have to see
Wish I can have you next to me

This man I talk about has been through so much
I just want one day to finally feel his touch
To hear his voice would be amazing
To see him up close means no more chasing

You’re photo genetic I can tell
If only you knew what I’ve felt
When I look into your eyes I fell in deep
Man why won’t you just come to me

Let me show you how you should feel
Just embrace me with your arms and let us seal
Our long lives together with no interruptions
Filling each other’s hearts without any corruptions

Comments

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

any man that doesn't see what you bring in terms of love and affection
his lost
your poem touches on feelings you will give someone once he sees what your intentions are
great job

Reinanena

TY pa, that's real on this side...sad to see that today's society is so lost, no one knows what they want anymore other than the new trend...

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