Emotional Death

Wed, 04/10/2013 - 01:15 -- blhale


United States
47° 50' 14.1324" N, 122° 12' 55.8684" W

I was drowning
In my own sea of tears.
I was burning
From the hole you left here.
I was poisoned
By the inflicted fear.
Then was beaten
Down by your rejection.
Left with nothing
At all for protection.
An overdose
Without a correction.
And hypnotized
By the way you stare.
From the sudden lack of air.
Then left bleeding
From not having your care.

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So powerful it definitely held my attention great poem

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