The Element of Free

A river of cool blue calm

It reaches my ears in this early dawn

The shades go down 

Color dances around

This is the greatest and most soothing sound

The element of free

It is the best place to be

I wish I could take you with me

Because there are no other places I would rather be

The shower of sun hits as the chorus has begun

It soothes me as I run

I can't help but grin

In meoldies like this, I always win

I am free

There are no strings attached to me

 

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