The Edge

Location

44301
United States
41° 2' 38.5404" N, 81° 31' 16.4676" W

Silently she walked
through the deep woods
taking every step into consideration
tasting every wooded scent in the cool air
the edge of darkness is near
the breeze of the valley below cold on her skin
She walks to the edge and looks over
She walks to the edge and goes over

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savigirl14

This is strong

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