Dying in the Rain



I am very sad

I feel like I'm dying in the rain

The rain is my tears

That I cry from everyday pain.


My once happy self

Is now gone

It has gone to another place

It has passed on.


I don't see it surviving any longer

I cannot take this anymore

A storm is coming

I cannot live life anymore.


Lord take this pain away

Show me happiness again

Before I go through this storm

Please carry me through this pain.


I cannot do this by myself

I will trust in you

I need to have faith

Alone I will believe in you.

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