dreams-a cool haiku

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hold on your dreams
for if dreams die

life is a broken-winged bird

in whom cannot fly

Hold on to your dreams
For when dreams go
Life is a football field
Frozen with icy snow.

 

 

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daytime13

Isnt this is a Langston Hughes poem?

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langston hughes wrote something similar, but its not exactly

i like the poem very much i recreated it to something that relates to me in terms of aspirations

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