Dreams

Fri, 06/08/2012 - 11:22 -- jwiener

While dreaming, minds wander to and fro
Soaring into an alternate realm
Discovering what one should know
The subconscious always at the helm

Comments

JonathonLeeSingler

When you incorporate the power of dreams into works beyond subconsciousness, you have then correlated true art, into a wonderous reality we can not physically see.

Very delightful in taste and vision.

 

Humbly,

 

Jonathon Lee Singler

Miss Independent

Enjoyed this in all its simplicity!

Angelwith1wing

Very good poem! Keep writing on my friend!

blurredROSESSS

Short and simple yet outspokenly amazing.

Great Poem!!!

powerful.imani

Love the message you gave off ,amazing work i would love to read more of your poetry so keep it up 'check out my poetry and hopefully it inspire you and others 

abbyy_duanne

This is so good!

Grant-Grey Porter Hawk Guda

Powerful expression. Always let poetry fill your life. Keep expressing your heart.  

Rudy Lee

(:

mangocaulfield

This poem is really pretty. I would print this above my bed if I didn't already have a massive poster.

upnorthdavid

Last line, love it! Never thought of the subconscious mind as the captain...great figure of speech

upnorthdavid

Pithy, powerful!

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