Downward Spiral

Wed, 10/02/2013 - 17:06 -- TRoidt

Raident little girls 

        living in galaxies

                  where mud is melted rainbows

                                                               turn in to

                                        worry ridden teens,

                           with scattered scars

           who consume and caress

until starts begin to spin.

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Very interesting

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