don't like the snow
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as a kid
love the snow
seeing the flakes fall from the sky
sticking to the ground
where i use to build a snowman
play tackle football
enjoy the snow fights
now as an adult
i don't like the snow
breaking records of inches that destroy homes
very dangerously slippery
just looks a mess outside
it was told
about global warning
nobody is listening
with all that is gone
are you listening now?
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Angelwith1wing
Wow! I like how you take something like snow and find the pros and cons of it from a child to an adult. I like it! Keep writing on my friend.
MVP-Most Valuable Poet
little something i created
there more depth to this poem than you think
lot more where people should not ignore global warning
Angelwith1wing
Oh! When you were talking about the snow in the beginning as a child, were you refering to snow as harmless and fun. As you got older, as I am trying to understand, you saw bad it was getting and that it is not harmless at all, but that it is a disaster. Snow is very harmless when you are examining it with a simplemind (hence a child), but with a wise mind (the adult) you can see clearly the trouble snow is bringing. Something like globalwarming (the global condition worse than snow) should not be ignored if we can see the harm of something like snow. I hope I got the deeper meaning this time. If not, tell me and I'll dig a little deeper into the poem. Keep writing on my friend.
Grant-Grey Porter Hawk Guda
Powerful expression!