Don't Give Up

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30906
United States
33° 22' 49.53" N, 81° 58' 31.08" W
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I felt like giving up
Each and everyday
A shower of sadness floods my soul, in the dryness of my pain
Each and everyday
I get abused, stomped upon, mistreated, by people trying to put me down
I feel like giving up
But my mind says no
My mind says don't worry
My mind says I am special
My mind says
Don't give up

Guide that inspired this poem: 
How to Write Poetry About Homelessness

Comments

wigfall87

12 years ago

I hope this poem inspires someone who is going through.

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

12 years ago

whatever motivates you, be the absolute best
stand out from the rest
this poem does a great job of inspiring in conquering all challenges

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