Do me a favor and stop!

Wed, 05/07/2014 - 00:55 -- gabigut

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 I've been living every day life as if it was just a breeze. Trying to live in every moment even though they're all just flying right by me. Reality. adulthood. They both slap me in the face. I'm forced to hold these overbearing bottons while thriving to succesfully finish this race. College and work bring every financial stress. Although it's last minute, I must prepare for tomorrow's best. Searching and searching I come across this. An interesting opportunity I couldnt bear to miss. Challenging my inner Edger Allan Poe, I must illustrate in words some of my smallest foes. My pet peeves, my ticks, call them what you may. But here I shall explain my little angers in a fluid and mindful way. I understand that everyone has completely different skills. But when you judge me for something you dont do I'd rather put a hole in my head with a drill. If your special talent is to excell in a sport, dont critique me on mine and i wont judge you on the court. I know that what you do is something i can only dream to do. So zip your mouth close because with my talent you dont have a clue. I know I cant shoot a hoop from a far. So dont tell me how to sing when your own voice sounds bizzare. And if you do sing and analize it til its completely bare, dont come to me and say i cant sing because actually my voice is quite rare. Ive never payed a person to teach me how to sing. I purely did it out of enjoyment and good comments is all it would bring. No, i dont understand all the different vocabulary. And you say youre the best but why dont you come face reality. If i had the teaching that youve had since birth, i could reach all of your pitches, but what would it be worth? I could be like you anyday that I want. But with my unique voice I'd like to see you reach my pitches oh so non chalaunt. So leave me be and understand that Im just passionate and happy. Dont come to me and try to preach your sophisticated ways so boastfully. I love to sing, but there is something I truely and deeply love more. Food is one thing I can say that I absolutely adore. Everyday my mom gives me four dollars to spend for lunch. But my objective is to save and save until i have a bunch. When i save a fair amount I try to get the most delicious thing on my mind. And during that moment when I can eat, I love to relax, eat, and unwind. But there are those greedy people who see what you have and just want what youve got. So they try to make you feel guilty and get the food that you bought. I saved my money and took the time to go and get myself this treat. But when someone else sees that its better then theirs, they get on their knees and kiss my feet. They will stare at my food and they have no problem staring at me. Their objective is only to make me feel uncomfortable and to eat for free. They have their own money, their own car, and time to go get their own food. I stare them down and have absolutely no problem explaining to them that theyre being completely rude. Its one thing if a friend of mine who always is willing to share, asks me for a bite then I dont really care. But when you barely or never talk to me unless you just want something from me. You better believe that I have no problem staring you down bitterly and angrily.  As dumb and rediculous as my little annoyances may be, its refreshing to know that Im not the only one with these pet peeves. Ill take a step back, take a breath, and let it all go. Although i am still a bit annoyed because a lot of people know. But when I take a deep breath and forget about the cons, all of my worries are completely long gone. But no matter how big or how old Ill grow to be, these two pet peeves will ALWAYS bother me.I Wask 

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