Disarray (A Pantoum)

Love me

Rid me of this uncertainty

Tantric intimacy, lust and anxiety

Vulnerability drips into my being

 

Rid me of this uncertainty

In low tides and peace

Vulnerability drips into my being

I am slowly pulled away

 

In low tides and peace

Unfamiliar tranquility succumbs to distain

I am slowly pulled away

Am I saving myself?

 

Unfamiliar tranquility succumbs to distain

Faint rage cloaked in passion and intensity

Am I saving myself?

Trapped in my dark Utopia

 

Faint rage cloaked in passion and intensity

Tantric intimacy, lust and anxiety

Trapped in my dark Utopia

Love me

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