Difference
Holding hands.
They're holding hands.
Hands.
My hands.
My hands are empty
Hearts.
Their hearts.
Their Hearts full with each other.
Heart.
My heart.
My heart is empty with sorrow.
Brains.
Their brains.
Their brains know they are enough for each other.
Brain.
My brain.
My brain only knows heartbreak.
Whole.
They're whole.
They're whole together - they fulfill each other.
Whole
I'm whole.
“Im whole” Is something I could only dream of
Happy.
They're happy.
They Are happy together without me
Happy.
I'm not happy.
I'm not happy while she is drifting away from me.
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laaflowers
Relating this poem is heart breaking however there is beaty in this poem about heart break. Even though they are together it gives us a sense of moving on. That we can move on even though its heart breaking.
In all words I love this poem !!
laaflowers
In all words I love this poem !!
