Defeated

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As much as he wants to be strong

There are people that want him to be defeated

People that he trusts

His so called friends

 

His own amo

Given to his enemies by his own soldiers

And with great anticipation

They wait for his defeat

 

The thing he hates most

The cowards hding behind him

He stood there and gave up

On himself and everyone he trusted as well

 

He thought of every last one of them as traitors

But now looking at them in the eye

He saw the fear inside them

They did not want him to give up

 

So he said to them, "Fight, do not give up"

Do not think about how many bullets you have left

Because maybe the last bullet

Could give you victory

 

 

 

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