Deceiving beauty- by Malcolm Bratcher

Deceiving Beauty

Her beauty is that of a million diamonds

glittering in the sun

each reflecting in its own ray of light making brilliant

deceiving patterns, 

deceiving love that blinds me

leading me to my fall

man'sahcilles heel, my heart she did still,

and yet the angels gasp in the wake of her prescene

the beginning of her day

you punished me with a beautiful sin

At times i want no more, my amor

 

 

 

 

 

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