Death vs Heaven and Hell

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Heaven gained another soul. 

Oh how far did he go?

Traveled in a mysterious place.

Where the zone is unknown.

Life is nothing but a capricous mess.

For we can obtain the most information but still be stress.

Face it, we are all ignorant on the subject  of death.

It's hard to carry on when you don't know what's next.

Are we just a lifeless form being inside of a coffin , just to face an eternity of darkness?

Or is our soul ignited?

Fired off to space ,Where the love of God is excited?

Or do we reach the pitts of hell?

Burn and fail..

No one could really tell.

Learning the facts of death is a mystery that should unveil.

 

Melissa Joseph

Comments

Honeyybee_

Face it, we are all ignorant on the subject  of death.

It's hard to carry on when you don't know what's next.

TessBurkhardt

That was awesome.

We are ignorant about death

Honeyybee_

Thank you !!! i appreciate it.

avapikul

I don't think we know what's coming until it's too late. Beautifully put we are ignorant about death

Honeyybee_

Which is true we really don't know what is after us. but thank you so much :)

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