'Deal' ... A Poem written by Big Virge 22/4/2017

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United Kingdom

So What's The... " DEAL "...
With Those Who Use Drugs
To Make Their Lives Run... ???

By This I Mean...
How Do DRUGS Make Lives For THUGS... ?!?
And BUILD THEIR... " KINGDOMS "... !?!

Pay For Cars And FANCY Yards... !!!
Where They Live LARGE... !!!
HARD... DARK And FAST... !!!

Because of... " CASH "...
They've Stashed Like Hash... !!!
And I Mean The GOOD STUFF... !!!!!

That Helps Them DASH...
From Land To Land UP IN Mountains...

Where Governments TRY...
But CAN'T BUY These Guys...
Whose Grade Is... HIGH... !!!!!

You See Deals Are Made...
… ALL Over The Place... !!!!!

And Violence GAINS You STATUS And GAME...

ESPECIALLY If...
You SHOW That You're BRAVE... !!!
And Willing To Behave...
In Ways That DISPLAY That You're UNAFRAID...
And Maybe Just A Little... INSANE... !?!?!

Like Maybe Say.... ???
Due To PROBLEMS Made...

HAVING To... SHAKE... !!!!!!!!
Some HARDCORE Bikers Who Liked To Get HIGHER...
Than A Drug Inspired... Richard Pryor ON FIRE... !!!!!

Your LIFE On The Line...
So You Go One Night Where You Know They... "Hide"...

And Request To See THE HEAD of These Biker Men...
And QUICKLY Suggest... As You Face BULLETS... !!!

That You... " Sit And Talk "...
Instead of Go To WAR... !!!!!

As You Pull A GRENADE... !!!
And... Simply Say...

... “Now make a wise choice, or we die today !”

Now You're ALL ALONE In A GUN FILLED Zone... !!!

But A MOVE Like THAT Is One That SHOWS...
Over Drugs Like Coc' That You WILL EXPLODE... !!!!!
UNLESS Some RESPECT Is QUICKLY SHOWN... !!!!

Now That's Just The Way That SOME Deals Go....

But Who Can You TRUST When That's How You Roll... ?!!!?

Now I'm Talking Bout' DOPE NOT Weed But... SNOW... !!!!
That... Back in The Day Most Heads Called... “ Blow “...

Now Deals Over WEED Like Most... " BIG DEALS "...
Have A Tendency To CEASE Because of... GREED... !!!

BELIEVE Money FEEDS How Dealers BLEED... !!!!
And Also FEEDS Their.... DESTINIES... !!!!!

That End Up Like VADER... !!!!!
From Drugs To Oh YES... Marriage Papers...

Deals Are Arranged In DIFFERENT Ways....
And Some REMAIN In Dealers Brains... !!!!!

I Was Told One Day By A Guy Who'd Made...
Some Deals SO REAL That Certain Scenes He'd Seen On TV...
Were TOO MUCH For Him To Watch... !!!
Because of MEMORIES of Deals That He'd Done...
Back When He Was Young That He Stated Were... STUNTS...

ALL Related To.... DRUGS... !!!!!

So Be WISE And RECOGNISE...
That You NEED To MOVE RIGHT... !!!!!

And NOT BE TOO FAST To Sign Or Cross Lines...
When What Is REVEALED Is A Chance To Make....

Some.... " SHADY "...

.......... " DEAL "........

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