Mon, 05/13/2013 - 23:00 -- jordin


United States
41° 27' 55.4544" N, 87° 7' 20.4096" W

I can see it all around me,
the deep deaths of suffocation
the pits of eternal falling
the sight of a blind man

I can sense it all around me,
the never ending attempts
the tantalizing hopelessness
the daunting tasks

I can foresee it in my future,
the never ending spiral case of debt

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