Dark land

Thu, 01/21/2021 - 07:20 -- Dineo

Thy should i i fall into the dark land
Thy should i drown into the water
I fall from the higher mountains
I tribute myself forever
The experiences that I make are very rich
The beliefs that I have everyday are more like incomplete
Am solitude to the moment that I can't recognize myself
The dark land where theres a lot of echo
The dark land where there's no love,no luck,just an empty dark land
All the opportunities I have are gone
Am just solemn
All i have is empty heart and empty life
Am living because of the air am breathing
I can't be proud
I can't be positive
Am always negative
The achievements i thought of are all gone
The poorness have been amazing
The richness have been bad
I fall from the dark land where I always drown in the water

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