The darkness

it swells up like a wave

getting taller every second

it looms ominously over my head

and then


it crashes down and engulfs me

making everything


I'm swimming

blinded by the blackness

but i cannot reach the surface

I'm drowning

though I can see the faces of those I know

floating towards the surface

and it's heartbreaking

because I don't know who

I am

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