CUPCAKE
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Everyone loves their sweets
but are they always good for you
for example CUPCAKES
they have that good smell the prefect colors that is appealing to your eyes ,and have so many flavors Of all kinds
It's everything you looking for only to want it all to yourself
but when you have it in your hand
it's like a magical dream to suddenly come true
you decide to take a bite
the taste is so delicious making you feel on cloud 9
where nothing can go wrong
so you continue to go back for that good smell ,and appealing looks
and the different flavors
beginning to become
stuck in the same spot again and again
making you start to gain weight ,thinking if you had more cupcake then maybe it will make you happy
only for it to let you down with the last bite leaving you with nothing
it was perfect in the beginning that's when they got you
but when that last bite comes around you back where you started
It's so interesting on how looks can change the mind having it continue to make the same mistake
Sometimes what seem good on the outside ain't always good
FALLING FOR THAT SWEET TALK
Doesn't cupcakes taste a lot like a BOYFRIEND
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powerful.imani
My poem CUPCAKES tells a very important message .The cupcakes is a "guy " that is so hard to walk away from like a good cupcakes .With its looks makes you fall for them .But you are only falling for what's on the outside . With the taste of a cupcakes and in a relationships ,the promises and how they make us ladies feel so special insides which is the SWEET TALK .Sometimes in relationships we keep coming back to the looks even if they ain't good for us .How relationships makes us feel complete then also makes us feel empty inside . Go for what's real because that SWEET TALK will get old and effectually run out.
Hope you enjoyed my poem and FYI i wrote this a long time ago so not as strong as some my recent poetry .But don't forget to comment and tell me how you feel towards my poem
thank you
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all your poems are strong for different reasons
never compromise your work
great metaphors