Craving

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85739
United States
32° 40' 6.1464" N, 111° 1' 19.9056" W
85739
United States
32° 40' 6.1464" N, 111° 1' 19.9056" W

 You are my 2 a.m thoughts

No one can replace you in my mind

You were my lover

A person so mesmerizing is hard to find

 

Forever we said

That was completely a lie

At least I kept my promise

As you walked out I wondered why

 

Your cigarette smell still stains my sheets

I find myself wanting just your presence

As I lie on the floor of this old saddened room

Im curious why I was left with this heartbroken sentence

 

Please come back to me soon

Im in need of your saving

Your lips, your hugs, your love

Is what ive been craving.

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