Cracks On The Road to Success

Thu, 08/01/2013 - 02:02 -- Que

Everyday i wake up i move much closer

As i get out of bed my feet touch the street

so many people on this road

My heart grows bigger my mind still unique

We were once children moving together

As i look left and right to for my friends

What happen to them i start to wonder

then STOP !

No time to worry i must keep going

the weather changes my feet get sore

this road starts to look longer

I start to wonder if it ever ends 

The pain from the walk makes me much stronger

as the rain pours the road bends 

I start to wonder again where my friends have gone

maybe they fell behind but why ?

We were once moving together

Somehow we got torn

My mind tells me no time to worry gotta keep going

Once again i speed my pace

The storms are groing the rain is showing

But i cant stop ill lose this race

Now its like i cant see any famililiar faces

but the goal is just steps away

I get there and im so happy to have found peace

but im lonely now that ive come to this stop

Ive finally got time to wonder

what possible fate my friends met

they must have fallen through

these cracks on the road to success

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